I’ve finished up this first study for the marquee, and frankly, I don’t like it. 

There are elements that are good, like the color and line treatment (not using a black line). However, I don’t care for the poses and and Alex’s head looks like it’s been through a meat grinder. I like the concept of Sam’s lips being colored, just need to work on the color. And her eye shadow is way too colorful. Need to knock that back a bit.

Also, I may drop the lirpa. I’ve got in mind an idea for Sam’s pose that I think will fit better into the story for Year Two…

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